Open Poetry #27 |
Passion Flower, Jasmine. |
Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Sipping on jasmine tea, I worship the leaves. Dive into the earth, a white moth means death and I am deathly afraid of fluttering things. Should I shatter, you could blame the old wives tales. Mixing magic potion part twilight and part bent dawn sierra grass. Fresh, home grown sticky-sweet tobacco. Bonfire smoke, white heat passion flower. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Jasmine, a more indepth look.Nicely done. angelblueyes |
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x8x_bigmike Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 130California, USA |
you have such a mix of feelings here, almost like you were painting porcelain, an interesting style, captivating. Mike _____________________________ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
fluttering things...yeah, me too |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Well done |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautiful! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
This made me think and question some things about myself... Very nicely done Susan C. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kaoru They all should work, enjoyed. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I often dab on a drop or two of pure jasmine essential oil--not only do I smell nice--I feel nice! lol And homeopathically, Passion Flower is my botanical! Enjoyed your poem--and your unique way of expression. Enjoy your day! Warm hugs and a smile, Linda [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (08-01-2003 10:01 AM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Jasmine is my health scent - have a plant of it here and ummm I flutter . . . LOL xxoo |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
You're a good fluttering thing, poetess.. Not an evil moth! Though, I'd never kill one, I can't even pick flowers without feeling bad.. I just remember a book by King, "Insomnia"..he could see the aura of flowers he'd picked turning black because they were dying.. Just like I thank my food before I eat it.. |
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