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She comes to me
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She comes to me |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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She comes to me From out the shadow to the sun Within a spirits sense it’s done A sighs illusion reaches out A remedy it seems for doubt. I see her through a veil of mist A light from out my minds insist An essence like a deity A vision of validity She comes to me desires course Riding on Go-di-vas horse And I a snow white wooing dove Cooing poetry of love. An echo of a visions grand The wind thrown up phantoms sand An apparition sparkling gold An inner visions dream I’m told But I am satisfied the goal And pay with love the entrance toll. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A sighs illusion reaches out A remedy it seems for doubt. I see her through a veil of mist A light from out my minds insist An essence like a deity A vision of validity She comes to me desires course Riding on Go-di-vas horse And I a snow white wooing dove Cooing poetry of love. An echo of a visions grand The wind thrown up phantoms sand An apparition sparkling gold An inner visions dream I’m told But I am satisfied the goal And pay with love the entrance toll. =================================== You keep writing like this and I'm gonna set up toll booths and make you pay with poetry.  Sy-babers this poem is so COOL..and so lovely I am smiling at all your word play and imagery..all your groovy symbolism and personification and last but never least your internal rhymes and voca banter... An essence like a deity A vision of validity She comes to me desires course Riding on Go-di-vas horse And I a snow white wooing dove Cooing poetry of love. I do so adore your minds insist... and we all line up to hear you coo  *ww*    No matter what the differences |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, What would I do without your dose of honey For to me it is right on the money. Have a peaceful, blissful day You have sproon flowers on my way. WWRS |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I don't believe there is anything which fills the heart and soul as much as validity from those you are gifted to look deeply into...as if God has placed them in your path, to help and heal, to serve as a tool which takes your hand and guides...like the validy of a beautiful sunrise...the warmth of it's being, the aura of something dancing all around you in the air...you are magnitized by these people and you feel it deep within your soul...as if you have known them all your life and before... This poem of yours has reminded me of those whom have happenstanced along my path..such as a very near and dear friend of mine...Sharon...who was indeed a living angel...and has since passed on into the afterlife.... This poem was astounding...thank you for sharing many smiles and a warmth beyond any resonable doubt.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ I haven't blushed in a long time. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very beautiful and always a pleasure to morning read. M |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
And I a snow white wooing dove Cooing poetry of love. What a loving write! Your way of expression is truly divine! I was caught up in the entire write! GOOD job! Blessings! Shirl Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I had some favorite lines from this...but I changed my mind, not once, but three times. SO....I give up... the whole dang thing is very nice Sy... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, Shirl, Thank you my dear. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus What's that very nice worth in money? LOL Thank you my friend. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You haven't blushed  in a long time Sy? Then we haven't been doing our job with responses!!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Oh yes you have, there I go again. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Seymour this is very charming ...... now I have visions too ..... Love, Margherita   |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Mr. T-Man! Thank you for sharing your "inner vision" with us, this fine first-day-of-summer morning! I have been saving my angel dollars just in case you set up a toll booth for those entering the gateways to your daily sonnets. And this toll I would surely pay with love, for my soul longs to read your words each day...  EA |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
She comes to me desires course Riding on Go-di-vas horse And I a snow white wooing dove Cooing poetry of love. So beautiful this morning, Seymour.  THANK YOU  Ethel |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour, my goodness, I cannot pick which lines are my favourite either, so I am putting this directly into my libary. Beautiful write on a beautiful Saturday morn. Thankyou for this start to my day. Enchantress will be along with tea....and so I offer you a cinnamon danish...Mmmmm. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita Beautiful thank you. Earth Angel I know you didn't apply but you got the job of being my earth angel. Ethel You are a sweetheart. Chris, Could I do less for a cinnamon danish? |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Loving it..... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A dove that cooeth in the morn Brings life, brings love, brings hope reborn A dove that cooeth in the noon Gives back the joy his heart consumed A dove that cooeth in the eve Sings anything your heart perceives Your verse is beautiful any time of day liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
timothysangel, Thank you so much. passing, Thank you for the beautiful. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Of all the memories of my past Yours will last and last and last. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
One of his best. Lovely. ARCTIC WIND |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dearest Seymour, will you ever know how much you are missed here at Pip? Those were the times, when there was your daily gift to enjoy and to study (always many new words for me!). You are in the upper spheres now and though your spirit is very much present, we can't call you back to continue to share your poetry. Many of those who replied on this wonderful poem of yours are well and alive, but they have abandoned Pip nonetheless. And this adds to the sadness. Call them back will you?! Remembering you with love and friendship, always. Margherita across the ether |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Margherita, How did you know I was thinking of Sy and Marge today? But then, of course, you knew somehow, and I won't question your abilities. It's almost a miracle that we can, with a quick click, bring to life again our beloved poets. It's also so wonderful to hear the voices again; as while I never actually heard Sy's voice, I still believe I can hear him in my mind. Such gifts he left for us. Thank you, my dear, for lifting his spirit this evening. |
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