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just breathe...
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just breathe... |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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breathe in breathe out let go all the pain blows away with the breeze your gone i left you you no longer invade my thoughts my dreams my writings i loved you once i cared once i dont now i dont i cant your gone with the breeze... yours truly Chelsea |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"you no longer invade my thoughts my dreams my writings" You say no longer this person invades your writing, but here he is invading this one.. It's cool, I like the way that works  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Off with his head!!! This was intense and I enjoyed your thoughts. Only you know when to exhale, and take the next breath. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice...I can relate |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I like the title as much as I like your poem! Your title caught my eye, and I am sooooo happy i read it ARCTIC WIND |
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