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Leaving Tonight
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Leaving Tonight |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk 
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This is not me That made you cry Or even Cheated and lied You did it to yourself It’s your fault So don’t turn to me For forgiveness Im leaving tonight Don’t try And make me stay For I don’t need the pain Goodbye Forever and more Hoping our paths Don’t cross again [This message has been edited by RedStoneEB (06-20-2003 12:42 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
That definitely has the ring of finality to it! Breaking up is not very much fun! Warm hugs, EA |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I think it should be, 'hoping our paths' instead of 'are'. Otherwise, I really enjoyed this one, and the strong feel of it. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ouch |
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joyfull girl Junior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 15 |
wow- beautiful... I love when so few words can convey the feelings of the heart.. wonderful -joy |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Pain in the heart.... is the worst pain one could feel!  ARCTIC WIND |
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