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Open Poetry #27

Faith

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-06-20 10:46 PM

Swift,
soft motion of my fingertips.
gentle
wind blows the feeling into fire,

I have lost my faith. oh!
try to understand..
I grasped the concept of your letters
but never could quite hold onto
the messages you sent.

I ate my words as crept
something breathing
in the corner of my eye.

Swift,
soft motion
of my fingertips
collide ..

I have..
lost my faith.

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

1 posted 2003-06-20 10:56 PM

ack!! that was an incredible poem! your very talented, i hope you know that

thanks for all the comments on my poems i dont like them very much but its nice to know some people do lol

great poem!

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2003-06-20 11:01 PM

Absolutely fantastic write..

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-06-21 04:30 AM

INCREDIBLE!

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2008-07-29 11:53 PM

Wonderful Read!

ARCTIC WIND

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