Open Poetry #27 |
Hazy Shades of Winter |
LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Very intensely developed Warmth and contact Exponents…younger then adults Possibly a song…stung out across the sky Surely something I’ll never forget, too intense Confirming total irresponsibility Emblematic motto within our physic mind We drive to the very act of speech in a language We only resisted. Profoundly in a metaphysical world! Were you surprised when I dropped my robe? Embodied with an aesthetic enriching consent I was, more then you’ll ever know! Funny what fate and love intends? We were true to the wide opened spirit And that sacred stare…you know the one' in dramatic terms and baby I still feel it Cause I’m never alone when your not there. Fate and voice became our profit…as your tore through my breasts Combed my hair, took off my shoes, while we roamed barefoot Towards a power imposed by forces beyond our control! Way Beyond Our Control! That madness which insubordination challenges and/or awards! Mystic seer chose our voices, as if time would listen while Sanding still, delightfully imprisoned in our hour glass, we two We generated selfhood of one, without psychological constrictions How tragically bittersweet, between the opposites Where nature wears a facial quality…yielding a transformation Very few have known Standing still, in a deliberate, empowering metaphor Our motif linked to remote depths characterized by a Paradox of the talisman….an era we had not confronted before Just driving and staring ahead, mesmerized, by something sacred. We were victims of innocence, and didn’t recognize Our happy meals…but we ate and expressed traces of them Reading satisfaction in every whisper. Association by the trophy which leaped into our pockets Using the third eye to feel…what the mirror revealed Do you remember, on your birthday, holding me there? While onboard that Sight and Sound of an old steam paddle boat? There were animals everywhere... Indicating the real weapon of our imagination and the Huge transformations, rolling off our tongues And the clip clop of the Amish ponies…to a tale classically sung The child’s mind is our beloved significance and connection Look back and see, here it comes….that voice so demanding From beneath the deepest part of our souls, which is the part We cannot ever control…and oh how I have tried. Kindness and in step with nature...feelings in dramatic terms Generating no guarantees but leaving a signature Oh my friend, do your realize how foolish we were and how Insignificant the lines we drew then? I knew your golden imaginations, the forms of your fears And perhaps at the time, my childish heart paralyzed reality Adulthood, rendering all logic ,as a cynical wildernesses to your male ego? And then to…perhaps…in every whisper Of those moments…I could not satisfy your oppositional posture No more then a simple challenge…you walked on Now and then, returning…knowing full well, you were my life My career, so I thought…now, both of us will never know Why did you take advantage of those feelings, why is it winning so important to you? I suppose, as we crop the green winter grass from beneath our shoes Detailing every part of our male and female egos…can you imagine? For just one moment…what forever would have been like, I do! We were, simply children…in our over conditioned bodies and mind. With hidden wild energy in every feral impulse, surely giving blind. Every feminist claim of letting life go by…without one try As we both possessed self denial…and radical misunderstandings Of a perfect and most poignant song…which life points out In actual letters composed by complex communication Without reasonable doubt. Between the sense and speech of oceans…infinite reasons & rhyme Raising it’s eyebrows at the audacity of our meager abstract foolish minds With limits written all over it….and a disappointment in our medium’s find For twas a gift my friend...one of those things that happen once in a lifetime I pray we've both learned our lesson. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
:O Once again, I'm drawn in by your poetry, hoping to see more from you as time goes by.. Awesome write, yet again. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you've been holding back! such talent! I'm in awe! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I agree with Dixie! --Such Talent in words and poetry ARCTIC WIND |
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