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Nautical Cottons |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Work weighs so heavy on shoulders so strong Tell tale in voice pressed too low far too long The approaching of eve, simple glee up my sleeve The most tangible turn, weightless stress to relieve As your footsteps appear, intuition comes clear Turning back sea foam velvet, cool and clean lying here Summer heat beads the brow, with both hands smoothing now Fluffy sighs mile highs as flung feathers allow Fairy land it would seem, works the best to redeem And in laughter to hiccup thus the days cares will stream Hitting mid ship and stern, fore and aft, each in turn With both hands smooth the cotton and soothe of the burn As you settle content, at my side this descent From their flight feathers drift, in this laughter we’re spent Not the type to enjoy of too soft of too coy But a clean pillow fight the just right touch employ Copyright Kkh 6/19/03 |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Really cool poetry here  Enjoyed this a lot. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Fairy land it would seem, works the best to redeem And in laughter to hiccup thus the days cares will stream Hitting mid ship and stern, fore and aft, each in turn With both hands smooth the cotton and soothe of the burn Oh my goodness!!! You already know I love this. Now I'll take a long winded, deep sighing breath. (sighing) This is a real beauty Kathleen~ |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
This Diamond...Amazing poem with just the right touch of humor and grace. ***Ivy Rose |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
This peice of perfection deserves another turn... Sunkissed. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Not only are your poems memorable and creative, but so are your titles!  Luvs 'n hugs, EA |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
OK...I wanta know who won? A very creative piece of poetic art here K. Some of my favorite images within... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i feel like my eyes are looking thur an intricate design of lace woven by your dreamlike words, whenver i click your page.......... |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
TD, this is wonderful in every way...love the images. (smiling, big time!) Patricia |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Bumpin' you. This is just as pretty as a picture Kathleen I never tire of reading you over. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good write K love the ending! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I was drawn to this poem by your title and drawn to it even more when reading it ARCTIC WIND |
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