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SweetSerenity
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since 2003-02-16
Posts 52
Canada

0 posted 2003-06-20 09:17 PM


I open my eyes, but ever so slow
The tears have a way to automatically flow
Crying has caused my vision to be hazy
But lately my mind has been going crazy
Sometimes I ask myself the question why
How much harder do I have to try?
I’ve expressed my unconditional love for you
Now I don’t know what else to do
To give you space, I try to resist
I know you get annoyed when I persist
But I need to know what you feel
To see if my fantasy can become real
I try not to get too carried away
I’m still afraid of what you might say
I’m scared you’ll say I’m moving too fast
Or that you love someone from your past
My heart right now is fragile and tender
But to you, I am willing to surrender
The distance won’t be a problem for me
But you still find it impossible to believe
Sacrifice is nothing when it comes to you
I’ll give to prove my love is true
But what I want you to understand
I’m waiting for you to offer your hand
So I’ve decided just this one last time
Will my heart attempt to make you mine
I can only try and do so much
To obtain the gift of your soothing touch
My soul hopes you make the right choice
And prays you listen to the inner voice
Allow your mind to block out my situation
And smile at thoughts of my eternal dedication
Remember to you, I’ll be forever kind
But darling, I offer this one last time

~A touch of Sweetness . . . . . A lifetime of Serenity~

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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2003-06-20 09:51 PM


Very beautiful write
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2008-07-26 04:21 PM


Beautiful Write Indeed!



ARCTIC WIND

apes531
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since 2008-07-23
Posts 35

3 posted 2008-07-26 06:19 PM


this write it touching keep posting
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