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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
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0 posted 2003-06-20 04:02 AM


Your like the siren
of
the sea

With scents of
honeysuckle dripping
from you

With kisses
like the undertow
of
raging sea

Your arms wrapped
like a clinging vine
entwine us

I'm captive
of your
romantic serenade

Let this enchantingly waltz
of time linger upon your
pillow


A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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1 posted 2003-06-20 05:08 AM


I love honeysuckle! great write here Glenn!
JilGirl
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since 2003-05-24
Posts 364
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2 posted 2003-06-20 08:57 PM


A stormswept romance, for sure!
May it last as long as the waves
pound the shore!

Great write!

Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands.

Magnus
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since 2001-10-10
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3 posted 2003-06-20 09:12 PM


There is something about sirens, sea and
of course...love..  Nice write Glenn..

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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4 posted 2008-07-26 04:19 PM


I like how you started the poem


Nice Write

ARCTIC WIND

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