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Life's Amazing Seas
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Life's Amazing Seas |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Seemingly undeveloped they came in groves Whispering words…like a magazine Falling softly, the hours of a whitened snow Fellowship to eternity, like Life’s amazing seas A passion’s mist touched my mind like sweet fragrance Feelings, lulling music, which can never be effaced Painting the portrait of my love’s soul, rich poetic offerings Hymns an onset of posterity, shapes of loveliness, metaphysical being A delicious paradise of nature’s surreal womb Congruent by an enamored designer of twilight’s moon Lingering Epitomes of heaven’s morning paved textures wondrous magic Where beauty sails in epic rhyme, within golden citrus expansion Garland spring waters moistly finding wise woven eyes Where traces change our persona Pearly white evaporates gray ash to a soft ruby glow Young emerald leaves culminating diligent threads of song As air guides cloudless, taking wings to soar Whispers low the inner sweet of life…roaming fields center And fireflies…sighs lifting and sweeping glistening rocks Like an azure sea, caressing miles of shore, lapping meditative melodies Soothing an unceasing sound…in a state where spirits intertwine With the energy of life…where I become a gliding prayer within Your consideration, your hemlocks wild and tall English sonneteers, attractive and lavishly writing our future bold Spring maturity raptures warmth in over abundance An afterglow where heavens develops eloquent social voice buoyant Inhaling a tutor’s kiss of ripe chrysanthemums Where acorns fall, bearing an aesthetic theory, nonmaterial Our unselfish light glows like a dictionary of new words Your desire becomes the cause of all my care Lending us beauty upon our hearts…graceful, worshiped and fair Inspirational life... By Lee J. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Wow, wow wow.  This writing is so diverse, to me, and I like it a lot."Epitomes of heaven’s morning paved textures wondrous magic Where beauty sails in epic rhyme, within golden citrus expansion Garland spring waters moistly finding wise woven eyes Where traces change our persona Pearly white evaporates gray ash to a soft ruby glow Young emerald leaves culminating diligent threads of song" Woooah... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
LeeJ Wonder filled with imagery and feeling...much enjoyed! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice collection of words...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
dang! speechless here |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Fellowship to eternity, like Life’s amazing seas A passion’s mist touched my mind like sweet fragrance Feelings, lulling music, which can never be effaced Just lovely, from beginning to end! Not to mention I am partial to poetry by the sea. Much enjoyed LeeJ~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
quote: another keeper, Lee. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I'm speechless as well... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Excellent Write Leej!  ARCTIC WIND |
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