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Open Poetry #27
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SgtMac
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0 posted 2003-06-19 09:14 PM


Aspens ruffling my hair
Never know the indifference
Of a sunset
The laughter of children
Without a soul around
Frost in summer sweat

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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
1 posted 2003-06-19 10:00 PM


"Never know the indifference
Of a sunset"

Wow, beautiful words here..

Local Rebel
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Southern Abstentia
2 posted 2003-06-22 12:50 PM


Well this definitely deserves another trip around the block...

Sgt -- you'd probably get more reads and replies if you take some time and do the same -- there is some wonderful work around here.

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Gaia
3 posted 2003-06-22 12:56 PM



I  enjoyed these. hello, guess we haven't met

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2008-08-06 10:52 PM


Nice haikus!


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