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Drink You Up
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Drink You Up |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Drink You Up pour yourself on me rain oh, rain down let me know each drop I too shall fall into this stream present me your clouds in a sky of no limits shower me velvet storm of cotton soak that the dry can drink you up [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (06-20-2003 08:17 PM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Thirsty, eh? Nice write.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
And you've done it again. Lovely. Patricia |
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OwlPoet Junior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 17Fullerton, California, Urantia |
This adds value to my day... sensuality and beauty... I am grateful Will |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Better take off the straw hat . . .  |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
i didn't realize i was thirsty, but this has my mouth dry and my heart racing. |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
raw desire and passionate languge -- this is quite good Helen -- the best I've read of you |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL at Krawdad's reply. Beautiful sensual write! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Desire of love indeed! It does seem like someone is thirsty? lol ARCTIC WIND |
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