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summer senryu
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summer senryu |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597
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Cat and I enjoy just about the perfect breeze First night of summer Kraw' |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I purr. how relaxed is this...nice. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
a perfect moment captured in perfect lines..excellent Kraw always nice to read your words |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
Ah, yes! Those purry kittens! One can enjoy all seasons, all hours - with those darlings! Question? Senryu and Haiku read the same, write the same, is the difference that Haiku is about nature and Senryu is of any type of topic? Great write! Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands. [This message has been edited by JilGirl (06-22-2003 02:50 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very beautiful. Love, Margherita  PS also for jilgirl (I think it is a perfect haiku as it contains the word Summer, which as a season is required to represent a haiku. Senryus are less categorical about the season element. Can be of any topic) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Krawdad Well done, enjoyed. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
K, and if I could have curled up on that caved-in boxtop with him . . . Thanks, Aenimal, appreciate your support. Shirl, Hard to draw a line between them. I'll get back to you on that . . . Dixie,  Thanks, Margherita, you might be right. Sy, Thanks, glad you liked. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
LOVE IT!, A perfect moment all is calm and quiet Wonderful write ARCTIC WIND |
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