Open Poetry #27 |
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hold me down.. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA ![]() |
I can't help but to toss And turn Violently within these dreams I try to run for shelter Within your arms But you're too far away I get closer Only for you to disappear The pain sinks deeper And deeper gnawing At my soul I can't take it Don't know how much longer I have to fake this smile Upon angel wings And moonbeams I used to place my wishes Now I cry for solid ground When it's you I wish would hold me down Cradle me Within these dreams When my heart and soul Shake violently... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
....I hold you in the pools of cold sweat that spill from clouds with no silver lining, and fill the sleepless hours of night. you are not alone in these thoughts...excellent write |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Edder thank you for gracing me with your reassuring words sometimes thats all anyone needs specially me atm obviously *hugs* If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (06-21-2003 01:17 AM).] |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
no words..i know this feeling well enough. hugs |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
....dang |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kris: sleep sweet slumber please and this is beautiful in itself for what it is xxoo |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Intense~ Most days it seems like an endless search for that solid ground you mention. Liked this a lot Ceinwyn~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
When it's you I wish would hold me down Cradle me Within these dreams When my heart and soul Shake violently......." Just beautiful words of passion! ![]() ARCTIC WIND |
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