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Ceinwyn
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0 posted 2003-06-21 12:48 PM


I can't help but to toss
And turn
Violently within these dreams
I try to run for shelter
Within your arms
But you're too far away
I get closer
Only for you to disappear
The pain sinks deeper
And deeper gnawing
At my soul
I can't take it
Don't know how much longer
I have to fake this smile
Upon angel wings
And moonbeams
I used to place my wishes
Now I cry
for solid ground
When it's you
I wish would hold me down
Cradle me
Within these dreams
When my heart and soul
Shake violently...


If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

© Copyright 2003 Kristen Brandon - All Rights Reserved
Edder
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since 2003-04-02
Posts 671

1 posted 2003-06-21 01:07 AM


....I hold you in the pools of cold sweat that spill from clouds with no silver lining, and fill the sleepless hours of night.

you are not alone in these thoughts...excellent write

Ceinwyn
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2 posted 2003-06-21 01:12 AM


Edder thank you for gracing me with your reassuring words sometimes thats all anyone needs specially me atm obviously *hugs*

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (06-21-2003 01:17 AM).]

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
3 posted 2003-06-21 01:19 AM


no words..i know this feeling well enough. hugs
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
4 posted 2003-06-21 03:42 AM


....dang
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
5 posted 2003-06-21 03:51 AM


Kris:

sleep sweet slumber please
and this is beautiful
in itself
for what it is
xxoo

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
6 posted 2003-06-22 12:41 PM


Intense~ Most days it seems like an endless search for that solid ground you mention.

Liked this a lot Ceinwyn~

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
7 posted 2008-08-06 10:44 PM


When it's you
I wish would hold me down
Cradle me
Within these dreams
When my heart and soul
Shake violently......."

Just beautiful words of passion!


ARCTIC WIND

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