Open Poetry #27 |
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NickTofteland Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 74MN, USA |
I grow because each morning, she rises like a faithful teacher revealing to me a new day, replete with treasures that nourish my mind and make me more than I was. I believe because storm clouds always crumble before her resolve as rays of golden brilliance slice through the darkness and dance triumphantly across the ocean’s surface reflecting a promise. I love as she loves the gentle sky who holds her high above all else when dusk pulls her away, she bleeds tears of crimson and violet, and her somber sky mourns drenching all, in pools of black. I cower when I look at her, and she glares back at me like an angry god, reminding me of my insignificance I run for the shade that I may lose myself in the darkness and forget that I ever was. I madden as her daggers of light rain down upon me blistering my soul, piercing my mind, and melting my thoughts into a formless substance that has no name but rage. I am as she is, a creature floating helplessly between this world and the heavens, but belonging in neither -- outsiders, surrounded by millions like us but still mostly alone. Psalms 20:7 "Some trust in chariots and some in horses, but we trust in the name of the Lord our God." |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I love as she loves the gentle sky who holds her high above all else when dusk pulls her away, she bleeds tears of crimson and violet, and her somber sky mourns drenching all, in pools of black." this is perfect for the summer solstice |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Absolutely astonishing!!!!!! I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gawd! this is tight! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and you write with reverence, m'friend. Very nicely done indeed! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
ocean’ ?? faith in love, beautiful words |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
outsiders, surrounded by millions like us but still mostly alone. A turbulent write....and a nice poem Nick~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Beautifully Written! ARCTIC WIND |
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