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vandana
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0 posted 2003-06-20 10:47 AM



Now and then
Time after time
I have been loved by you
I will be loving you
Once again
After winter Is gone
Pouring rain
Whispering softly words
I hear
Into this song
I may have found love again
WIll be loving you
As you are loving me
Each day of spring
Wahes my tears away
Finding my path to love
Loving you
Once again
The sky so blue
The clouds I see above
Love that surrenders my heart
for you
I realise
It Is true
Been loved before
Been loved again
In my life
Loving you forever

© Copyright 2003 vandana - All Rights Reserved
garysgirl
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1 posted 2003-06-20 11:02 AM


It Is true
Been loved before
Been loved again
In my life
Loving you forever


This is so pretty, Vandana.  
I enjoyed reading it.  
Ethel

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2003-06-20 11:14 AM


Love that surrenders my heart...what other kind is there?

beautiful, vandana
~smiling
M

littlewing
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3 posted 2003-06-20 11:19 AM


V:

I do know this all too well
Beautiful just beautiful friend
xxoo

Goldenrose
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4 posted 2003-06-20 11:24 AM


Beautiful words of love,spoken so well.

Thanks for the words.

Goldenrose.


Ivy Rose
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5 posted 2003-06-20 07:07 PM


Vandana...This is just exquisite writing. Beautiful images and superb crafting make this poem outstanding in my eyes. ***Ivy Rose
JamesMichael
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6 posted 2003-06-20 08:02 PM


Reminded me of the Elvis song..."I will spend my whole life through, loving you."
James

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7 posted 2003-06-20 10:54 PM




(smiles) Oh Vandana, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I am so happy to hear of your new joy and wish for true love to awlays sing in your heart! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

passing shadows
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8 posted 2003-06-21 04:31 AM


oh girl! this is so beautiful!
A Romantic Heart
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9 posted 2003-06-21 05:04 AM


Your heart speaks loudly, enjoyed peeking into the windows of your heart!lovely poem
Nan
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10 posted 2003-06-21 07:08 AM


Very nice, Vandana...
Margherita
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11 posted 2003-06-21 10:38 AM


You show so tenderly your loving soul.
Love, Margherita

taramw
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12 posted 2003-06-21 10:59 AM


*sigh* This evoked so much... thank you for sharing.

It's better to be a lion for a day than a sheep all your life.
-- Sister Elizabeth Kenny

QjQ
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13 posted 2003-06-23 05:34 PM


nicely written and enjoyed...

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


Magnus
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14 posted 2003-06-23 06:44 PM


Vandana, a beautiful poem of love with
an excellent ending...Very nice lines.

Artic Wind
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15 posted 2008-08-12 10:07 PM


Love love love, Beautiful huh?!?
**sigh**


ARCTIC WIND

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