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Blazing Eyes
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Blazing Eyes |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Blazing Eyes Muscles ripple with suppressed strength tense with waiting what is to come Silent stillness fills heated air till there’s heard a gasp that’s fearsome Blazing eyes shine with wild anger of the restraints that hold in check Seeking freedom the Black wishes that none be placed upon his back This unknown weight must now be thrown to eat the dust from which it came Then from his throat triumphant sound victory the Black did claim Winds fill heavens with darkest clouds that boil as if they’ve been bidden Then lightning streaks across the sky reveal blazing eyes once hidden Karen Mc Neil |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
That's momentum for you~ Love the rise and fall in the dark pools that fill the eyes. Very nice writing Startime~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Karen, this is beautifully gripping, sweet friend, I felt the spiritual glow to this, very striking imagery! (kiss on cheek) I noticed you have a new last name, I sure hope you have found that new special somebody as I know your heart will find true happiness from here on in, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*chills* I like this one lots! |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
I picture a stallion, black as midnight, captured but not for long. Freedom is more than nothing but a word. * * * * I think I am seeing * * * * stars * |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Awesome write !! Enjoyed. Chris  |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Thank you, everyone...I am so glad you enjoyed it.... A large black stallion he is with power that leaves one in awe and a desire for freedom that blazes in his eyes....A magnificent animal, that I was priviledged to gaze at in wonder while a storm approached across the horizon...I took this poem from real life.. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
With an ability to paint, paint very well all that your eyes and mind see. Ya still got the touch, you always will. I couldn't remember it this was a horse or was your dragon...Now I know... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, I hear triumphant sounds of victory over chains ... freedom blazes! Beautiful! Love, Margherita |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
Crikey! i got goosebumps! that must have been an awesome sight. enjoyed |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Great Write, hafta read again...... Tima C. Please visit my website: www.southerncountrywebdesign.com/~heart/ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Karen, this is an amazing write...I love black stallions. They are just beautiful....and you painted the picture perfectly. Hugs  Ethel |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Star: you have brought them both alive on these pages . . . awesome write God, I love horses . . . xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (06-23-2003 07:59 PM).] |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
A beauty! ARCTIC WIND |
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