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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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all in the manner of what you do broken by the occasional flu the background call of the wild or foreground cry of a needy child... all in the table manners of where you live the much you share...what you really give the manner of what you do broken calls from a motley crew... in search of promise... sailed seven seas saluted lords...plundered to please to the background call of the wild and the foreground cry of a needy child all in the manners...world events take place a table is set to prosper or regress global maps constantly retraced how thoughts propogate...the way we think change of style at a eye's blink the way cultures step around the world the way a nation's flag is set unfurled... think of continued human change of things the brutal surprises that abundance brings one peace intitiative overides another continued conflict...why bother? © Copyright 2003 Martin Dansky - All Rights Reserved [This message has been edited by ecrivan (06-20-2003 07:59 AM).] |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
continued conflict...why bother? whats the alternative? thought provoking as usual |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
That is part and parcel of the human experience!--We have to keep on trying! Mankind is a work in progress! Another interesting write, Dear Ecrivan!  Peace, Love & Light, Earth Angel |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Martin . . . I know I know all too well you have touched me with this write and made me think Which is a good thing trust me I need to do this more often this thing called thinking thank you xxoo |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
why bother? I always say because there's not much else to do.  Enjoyed the think write! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
there is always hope for mankind...a very thoughtprovoking read...brings to mind how what we do, say and act affects everyone around us...a wise write, thank you for sharing. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Brilliant write and loved the style how things were echoed back in other lines..well done |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
LeeJ, welcome to Passions...this piece get my angst out at the futility of repeated peace initiatives especially in the land of origins. Serenity, Outside of making trouble...there isn't much left to do but watch with amusement or consternation at how we can continue to get out of it [This message has been edited by ecrivan (06-21-2003 12:43 AM).] |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
inkedgoddess, I'd say the answer is ironically as serenity has it..there isn't much else left to do..with whatever we've been programmed to do littlewing... thinking about where we're going is always important  Raph,EarthAngel thanks for sharing [This message has been edited by ecrivan (06-21-2003 12:53 AM).] |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed the Write ARCTIC WIND |
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