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Open Poetry #27

The Wind (last Goodbye)

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

0 posted 2003-06-20 02:59 AM

The wind calls out to me
So gently
The cold air rushes
And brings with it
Love

It twists and turns
Moving up
Slowly brushing against
My lips

Giving me a kiss
I open my eyes
As the wind fades

There I stand
In the graveyard
Looking at
Your gravestone

Tears falling
From my eyes
Knowing the wind
Was your last goodbye

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-06-20 05:12 AM

gawd!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2003-06-20 05:49 AM

Nice writing...james

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2003-06-20 09:52 AM

Ethereal and hauntingly beautiful...

Luvs 'n hugs,
EA

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

4 posted 2003-06-20 09:52 AM

thank you thank you for the replys

my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2003-06-20 10:24 AM

Good God Lee
now you have found your place
This is a brilliant bittersweet piece
Good for you
(the writing)
you are finding your place nicely
I am proud of you
xxoo

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2003-06-21 11:20 AM

Sad and chilling wind, Lee, but a very good write. I enjoyed this style from you.

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

7 posted 2003-06-21 03:08 PM

very sensory write....I felt it

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2003-06-21 06:07 PM

Deeply touching and beautiful!
Love, Margherita

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

9 posted 2003-06-21 07:43 PM

yes, the wind gives and takes away
very pretty words

WindSong
Member

since 2002-12-23

Posts 313
Long Island, New York

10 posted 2003-06-21 10:05 PM

"Tears falling
From my eyes
Knowing the wind
Was your last goodbye"

Beautiful way to end it. I'm outta words right now, nice job. Peace. ~*~Kirah~*~

"Life is not measured by the moments we take,but by the moments that take our breaths away." -Author Unkown.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

11 posted 2008-08-05 12:56 PM

This is a very Sad Write!

ARCTIC WIND

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