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Open Poetry #27

Cool glass of water

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-06-19 09:46 PM

You see, the thing is..
the thing about her is,
Well I went to her house this one time,
and she made me a grilled cheese with an iron.
There's something about that,
it made me thirst for her.
She was like a
cool glass of water.

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2003-06-19 10:41 PM

It is the simple things...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

2 posted 2003-06-19 10:47 PM

This is so cool...no, HOT!! I think I might know this person! Love your poem!

Canon_D_111
Member

since 2003-06-04

Posts 58
New York USA

3 posted 2003-06-19 11:09 PM

quench the soul...seduce the spirit...and the path to a man's heart is through his stomache.
I like this you kept it simple and leave much to the imagination...

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2003-06-19 11:52 PM

tell her to send me the recipe,,,,,,sounds like my kind of girl..........

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2003-06-20 12:00 PM

GRIN...

TD

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

6 posted 2003-06-20 12:03 PM

Now....that lady has imagination. The kind that strikes a fire and keeps on burning, long after she's gone....

Great write!

Tima C.

If you cant get rid of the skeletons in your closet, you'd best teach them how to dance. George Bernard Shaw

Old_Shoe_New_Laces
Junior Member

since 2003-06-16

Posts 31

7 posted 2003-06-20 12:52 PM

HAHAHAHA... yas... the ironed grilled cheese... I know that recipe... a college recipe I believe. Enjoyed certainly. Cool glass of water... it works.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

8 posted 2003-06-21 10:26 PM

This is awesome . . .

LMAO - short and sweet
xxoo

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

9 posted 2008-08-05 12:57 PM

Oh my!--

lol

ARCTIC WIND

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