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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2003-06-19 11:48 PM




i am...
a lost little girl.....
stumbling on nighttime pictures on the sky,
i am....
a sometimes wallpaper/ sometimes recipient of roses poet,
still unknown in the flesh....to most here
i am
a raging, sagging, aging (but beautifully..         
sometimes SCREAMING for attention,
but somewhat tamed now..........goddess,
i am...
an ugly wretched mean old witch

i purge...
as l0  fingers ignite black on blue
i will
slice and dice an arterie or two
if you show me LOVE.......
i am
99percent of my written word...

now what about you?


[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (06-21-2003 07:11 AM).]

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Kaoru
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1 posted 2003-06-19 11:51 PM


"i purge...
as l0  fingers ignite black on blue
i will slice and dice
an arterie or two if you show me LOVE.......
i am 99percent of my written word....

now what about you?"

Brilliant work!

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
2 posted 2003-06-19 11:52 PM


i am 99percent of my written word....

now what about you?


Moi Aussi

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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3 posted 2003-06-19 11:59 PM


Ya know...

Inked Goddesses seem to shimmer brighter than the stars above.  
Brilliant write! TD

littlewing
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4 posted 2003-06-20 12:37 PM


Ok now you know I will be arguing
the saggy part of this . . .
the mean witch part yeah - I can see that
ahaha OMG I am sooo kidding lmao at myself

Seriously

YOUR REALLY BACK!!!!!!!

xxoo
now thats my Miss Inked


inkedgoddess
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5 posted 2003-06-20 08:06 AM


thank you.
kauro
TD.........what a lovely thing to say
sue, yes, im sort of back, a bit subdued tho
raf, okay ..translate, cant find it in french
  online dictionary

bklynboy
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since 2002-12-15
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florida
6 posted 2003-06-20 11:49 AM


hmmm....attention? we all want attention but I think your beautiful words (and not to mention picture) says it all.
littlewing
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7 posted 2003-06-20 11:54 AM


ahhhh I cant see you being roped for too long lol or then again maybe I can lmao
yes . . . I know
xxoo

inkedgoddess
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8 posted 2003-06-20 12:43 PM


thanks,
bboy, what in the world would i do without you  
sue, you are learning about me well, arent u ?

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Local Rebel
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9 posted 2003-06-20 11:43 PM


I like application specific poetry like this -- it's always fun.  

An interesting self-portrait.

Kudos kid... (yeah -- yer a kid).  

Ceinwyn
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10 posted 2003-06-20 11:55 PM


damn! in a good way

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

littlewing
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11 posted 2003-06-21 03:05 AM


ehehehehehehe . . . .
passing shadows
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12 posted 2003-06-21 03:16 AM


awesome write lady michele
inkedgoddess
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13 posted 2003-06-21 07:37 AM


thanks guys,
dixie.......thanks for your constant support
sue, you are laughing huh.....lol me too
i wish i could say more
cein, local.......nice to find new people
saying hello....yes, of course, im a kid,,
  if i wasnt, id be in a coffin by now!!!!!

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
14 posted 2008-07-30 12:02 PM


enjoyed the powerful write!



ARCTIC WIND

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