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life's riptides
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life's riptides |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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some days the tide pulls with too much force and power my feet lose their grip |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kacy, And that, friend, is why we are here... If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my..I know this feeling! Good one Kacy! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thank you, Larry and Nancy! Yes, that's true, Larry. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Truer words were never spoken! Good one Kacy. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Now Sharon, don't you know I was hopin to borrow your gripper techniques? Ahem, Larry? You seem to have those shifting sands under control. It's about time you shared your secret(s).  |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
and sometimes I think the tide is all about what this creation is...for the good and the bad  |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
I thought learning to mov with the ebb and flow of life was what we were supposed to do. ??? *smile* |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
This haiku does exactly what it is supposed to do...instill deep thoughts, using very few words, good job, Midnightsun.. :-) |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
nice writing thank you. goldenrose. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
I bow to you now . . . . AMEN sadly Get bigger shoes Kacy xxoo |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
...twenty or less equals sixteen! Righto, you go Kacy~  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 good write! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Understanding write Kacey! ARCTIC WIND |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a surprise to see this one here again! Arctic, you do spend a lot of time in the archives. Thanks for reading! Hope you aren't ever caught in any 'riptides' metaphorical or otherwise. |
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