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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-06-19 09:10 PM



Changed


you are green
I am earth
we now grow
with this our birth
in this seed
in it’s stretch
a wind flowers
breath to catch
blowing free
flow for all time
once a stranger, now friend
changed you to mine


© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Larry C
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1 posted 2003-06-19 09:25 PM


Helen,
Your inkwell runs deep. As does your heart...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Brad Majors
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2 posted 2003-06-19 10:01 PM


nice
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3 posted 2003-06-19 10:33 PM


Always good...always depth in a tiny package. Your work is must-read for me.

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Aenimal
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4 posted 2003-06-19 10:49 PM


Your words always make me sigh..in some for their beauty in others their sadness..but always in awe of your ability
Edder
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5 posted 2003-06-20 01:34 AM


i've heard of eye-candy, but if there is a such thing as heart-candy...this is it
vlraynes
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6 posted 2003-07-24 02:36 AM



Helen...I enjoyed this.  Nicely done, my friend.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

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7 posted 2003-07-24 12:03 PM


this..this is flawless
S Arthur Grey
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8 posted 2003-07-24 02:27 PM


"a wind flowers
breath to catch"

original
nice

garysgirl
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9 posted 2003-07-24 02:31 PM


Helen, everything you write
is beautiful.
Hugs  
Ethel

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