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Mirrors Aura
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Mirrors Aura |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Mirrors Aura There is an aura in my mirror That smacks an Irish wirra A milieu a sense of overtone That phantom through my skin and bone She was all that I could ask But I too weak to fill the task And she in part did drift away And I miss her more each day There are some things that cannot be No matter sky or calm of sea Each river flows and takes a path But some to swift to take a bath Memory rains my spirits core Distain in vain forever more They are the castles of your mind Where haunting thoughts through passage wind She is a sprite within my glen And does appear each now and then. |
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VOE Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 119From the land of Camelot |
Yes, Seymore, you captured me with the lines: 'Each river flows and takes a path, but some too swift to take a bath'! Those words speak volumes, although I enjoyed the rest of the poem just as much!! ~~V~~ I speak from the Voice Of Experience |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Wonderful mix of emotions and images,Sy.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
VOE Thank you for the read and lovely comment. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you scorpio You're up early. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A milieu a sense of overtone That phantom through my skin and bone ============================= YER SO KEWL!!!!! Well, Im Irish...will that help?  got any blarney stones that need kissing LOL  *winkiewinkie*   "How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you." |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Morning Lovely poem. Sometimes I have to ask a question to exspand my horizons. What is an Irish Wirra? Thanks Bon-Bon  |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
There are some things that cannot be No matter sky or calm of sea Each river flows and takes a path But some to swift to take a bath ~*~ Acceptance of certain things takes a great deal of common sense, and growth. But who is to say we cannot accept the reality of our dreams, come what may? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I just awoke from a beautiful dream Sy.. not that I wanted to mind you... Then I open Passions doors.. To read and dream forevermore. Lovely lovely morning read love. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, Has held me in the same embrace~ [This message has been edited by Enchantress (07-24-2003 09:06 AM).] |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Sy, Beautifully penned. There are days when my mirror is the same.. Susan C. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ah, a magical write it is this sunny morn! Wonderful Seymour. Perfect way to start my day. Lemon tarts with tea. hugs, Chris  "At one glance |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow....lyrical and full of such beautiful language. Eric |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, No blarney stone but I have a cheek you can practice on. LOL WWRS Bonnie, An Irish wirra is an expression of lament. Lady In White, A thoughtful answer, thank you. Nancy, Thank you dear be right there for tea. Hugs Susan Everyone has those days, thank you. Chris, Bless you my sweet. Hugs |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Eric, Your answer is a pleasure to read. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I felt the sorrow of this one as I remember "letting one get away" as well. However, you know I am just compelled to "play with you " right?  There's an Irish fae in my glen too At night she flits all over. She told me that she kissed your cheek, You cute, Floridinian rover! Sometimes it just pays to stay in your own backyard Sy [This message has been edited by Mysteria (07-24-2003 11:58 AM).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy Touching an ache within my own. Lovely writing! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Ah yes...just lovely Sy. Some very cool lines in here...especially this... "A milieu a sense of overtone That phantom through my skin and bone" Awesome write, sir poet. Hugs, ~Vicky "My friends are my estate." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, I guess you are right, but I just can't stop from thinking. LOL Martie Thanks for the lovvely. Vicky, Love ya sweety. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Well bring that cheek with you and I'll give ya a big ole smooch under the Arch "How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Memory rains my spirits core Distain in vain forever more They are the castles of your mind Where haunting thoughts through passage wind Seymour, you are so sweet to gift us with your wonderful memories and beautiful thoughts. I love to read them.  Hugs to you, sweet poet   Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh I felt this |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, That's a date. Ethel, Hugs back sweet thing. passing, A delightful sigh. Hugs back. |
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