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Open Poetry #27

deimos II

mirror man
Senior Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 814

0 posted 2003-06-12 12:56 PM

        Where in all microcosm of his nothing
        expands a record of blindness so near?
        He yields to your mind, your will,
        if such recalls a better year.
        Or else, some particle buried so deep
        revived, it would cast a light to see
        by circles, streams for play and ease
        the joy of unlearned lessons.

        If in silence, he has neglected
        just one who listens, know this
        the planet crawls along
        reflecting painful course
        shaded in layers and gears.
        Hell arrives in strata,
        and heaven reels in rolling years.

[This message has been edited by mirror man (06-12-2003 12:58 AM).]

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2003-06-12 01:11 AM

One of your very best Mirrorman~
Love the shifting gears and years~

Enjoyed the cruising~

mirror man
Senior Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 814

2 posted 2003-06-12 09:24 PM

Thank you, bluesy.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

3 posted 2003-06-24 04:10 PM

enjoyed,,,

mirror man
Senior Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 814

4 posted 2003-06-24 05:27 PM

QJQ -- thank you very much.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2009-01-24 12:03 PM

Enjoyed this Very much!

ARCTIC WIND

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