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Amongst the aroma of cafe' bars and florists/ from Open 16 / requested by Aenimal
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Amongst the aroma of cafe' bars and florists/ from Open 16 / requested by Aenimal |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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Amongst the aroma of café bars and florists Somewhere between sandstone walls silence swept lightly over cobbled street the ocean’s breath sprinkled flavour people roamed with lost tongues awkward hands and face’s blank with dreaming smothered by the sea amongst the aroma of café bars and florists I felt love around coffee cups you filled them with constellations and I saw you fading our eyes smelled flowers in windows they wrapped them into admiration petal by petal fingering them marking a reality to somewhere I have and have not yet traveled Dark Angel 25th October 2001 |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I see why aenimal wanted you to repost..well done sweetie.. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
I felt love around coffee cups you filled them with constellations and I saw you fading our eyes smelled flowers in windows they wrapped them into admiration petal by petal -------- What a gem, this poem... What a gem, YOU  Regards, my friend, Sudhir |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I -knew- I was up in the middle of the night for something....now I know....because Dark Angel was about to post, and I couldn't wait until morning to read it! Such a voice you have....I want to hear more of it...more, more, more.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yep... this is poetry.... well done my friend.. one of these days I am going to learn to write like this...lol..yeah right... not much hope for me..but I sure enjoy reading yours. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
God I love these words. See the responses Lady M? Perhaps now you'll listen and appreciate your writes in the archives a little more? Modesty modesty...love this line and everything srurrounding them I felt love around coffee cups you filled them with constellations and I saw you fading |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
A wonderful write. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! makes me want to go surfing around in the archives! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
smothered by the sea amongst the aroma of café bars and florists I felt love around coffee cups you filled them with constellations and I saw you fading I respect and enjoy your work so much Maree. I only wish to read you more. This is stunning~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
you filled them with constellations and I saw you fading our eyes smelled flowers in windows they wrapped them into admiration petal by petal fingering them marking a reality to somewhere I have and have not yet traveled ==================================== YES... your archives are full of treasures... rewrite..repost...let them breathe...it will be our pleasure to inhale them   No matter what the differences |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
She does encompass that special something that makes everyone want to dip their quill into her inkwell, and imagine that they can write...just as she does. Well done Maree... and Raph? Thanks for being pushy!  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Maree: this is like a dream . . . God I love your writing seems like I place I need to be . . . and yes good call Raph This is beautiful Maree xxoo |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
You guys are just too kind, thank you for your lovely compliments and replies. I am truly humbled.  And Sir Raph...It's an honor to have poetry requested and especially by you m'friend. I thank you.  Maree |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Maree, I might be a little envious of this, but I won't be... This is superb poetry, poetic expression and use of metaphors... Awesome....I could smell the coffee too.. I like those quaint little places...though I have never been to one... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"I have and have not yet traveled" I feel so smart. I called you Luscious all along! [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (06-19-2003 07:29 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Maree, this is so beautiful. I'm glad you pulled it from the archives...I hope you decide to re-post more that us newer ones have missed?? Please??? Thank you...I knew you'd say yes!!!  Hugs Ethel |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Add my name to those glad you reposted this... we all miss poems... and this shouldn't be missed. *S* Excellent write! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maree...I'm glad to see this again...loved it before and still do. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Glad he asked I really liked it Dark Angel! ARCTIC WIND |
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