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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2003-06-18 07:35 PM

Getting Into time
Getting into hours
Let the night turns into day
Let your love burns
All the times
Getting into every way
On your own
Candle burns away
Time will tell you why
The world can't change it all
Don't let it fall
Whispers words of dreams
Dreams to furture
That hold us Into time
Getting into love
Love that lives
Love that gives
Getting Into every storms
I will hold your hand
Tell you make it through
Time of your dreams
Will tell you everything
Getting into.....

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-06-18 07:37 PM

Different, definately good, though.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2003-06-18 07:52 PM

Vandana, your poetry continues to grow
and you broaden your thoughts with each new
write....Keep going..

JilGirl
Member

since 2003-05-24

Posts 364
Washington

3 posted 2003-06-18 07:53 PM

Different, indeed!
Yet very insightful.
Glad you left out "getting into trouble"!
Many of us excell in THAT!

Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2003-06-18 07:58 PM

Indeed, "Time will tell"--but you've done a pretty good job of it yourself!

Warm hugs,
Linda

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2003-06-18 08:21 PM

Ennjoyed these timeless thoughts, Vandana.

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

6 posted 2003-06-18 09:56 PM

Hmmmmm ...

A very different kind of poem for you but I liked it. Hugs, Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2003-06-19 02:46 AM

very good write, liked this a lot

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

8 posted 2003-06-19 11:16 AM

nice write

regards
sudhir

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2003-06-19 11:19 AM

Vandana, I see the stretch of thought
in this lovely write...

thank you so much for continuing to grow
as a poetess....

pisumnux
Junior Member

since 2003-06-11

Posts 49
Troy, NY

10 posted 2003-06-19 11:20 AM

Time almost always tells why.

Great poem. I loved it.

"There are three things men can do with women: love them, suffer for them, or turn them into literature."
- Stephen Stills

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

11 posted 2003-06-19 01:05 PM

I love the title and how you reinforced the meaning with such certainty.

Yep, you have to get into it if you want to get anywhere.

Nice work vandana~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

12 posted 2003-06-19 09:37 PM

(big hugggssssssss) I just keep enjoying and marvelling at how your golden heart continues to stretch with poetic thought and melody, dearest friend, you are maturing as a wonderful poet and I will always be your dear fan, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

13 posted 2008-02-24 05:44 PM

Enjoyed your thoughts

ARCTIC WIND

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