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Jason Lyle
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With my darkling

0 posted 2003-06-12 12:22 PM


You grasp for answers
Falling just short of the truth
What God try you now?

[This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (06-12-2003 12:22 AM).]

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Chris-
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1 posted 2003-06-12 12:34 PM


spoken with courage and an opinion, I'm glad to see there are a few people in here not afraid to break from the main stream, great right
inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2003-06-12 06:45 AM


packs a punch, in few words........not too relgious here, but i liked this
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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3 posted 2003-06-12 12:30 PM


Jason - I have looked everywhere and you know what?

I trust myself instead - listen to that inner voice
sometimes it speaks back

provoking write here
I love this
xxoo

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2003-06-12 12:38 PM


yeah
QjQ
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5 posted 2003-06-24 04:09 PM


enjoyed,,
Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
6 posted 2003-06-24 10:09 PM


I hear David Beckham's got minor diety status in Japan..at least i've seen him produce results..grins
Gina Culliney
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7 posted 2003-06-25 03:17 PM


Are you butting heads with the big guy upstairs again? Enjoyed this lil teaser!
Wind
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8 posted 2003-06-25 03:19 PM


true.

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
9 posted 2009-03-24 04:07 PM


This has courage all through this piece ~ Enjoyed the poem, short, but powerful!


ARCTIC WIND

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