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Open Poetry #27

Gently Falling The Blush

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2003-06-25 03:12 PM

A firmness to the touch of fingers light
upon the skin of blush. A smoothness
to the brush of lips, sweetness to the
taste as teeth delicately caress
the unbroken speckle of a pallette’s
paint.

Clinging in contrast to the foliage
green, clutching against the pull
of mother earth toward the fall
of Newton’s fame....

Clustered in a menage a trois,
as a delicate scent wafts the
breeze of Summer’s heat into
the falling sunset as colors
match...

Soon the offering will dance
the serpent’s eyes as tendrils
of the vine gently twist the
stem and break the offering
to man from the tender and
delicate hands of woman...

Apples...

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-06-25 03:17 PM

This is beautiful, Magnus.

quote:
Clustered in a menage a trois,
as a delicate scent wafts the
breeze of Summer’s heat into
the falling sunset as colors
match...

this is exactly what my apples are doing now...clustering...waiting for their ripe to find them...

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2003-06-25 03:18 PM

ah..you paint it with grace my friend..and describe in terms to spark the imagination...

well done...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-06-25 03:19 PM

Oh my how lovely Barry...
I chose the same stanza as Kari so I won't repeat it again here.
Fantastic write poet sir.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
you haven't been listening.~

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

4 posted 2003-06-25 03:20 PM

as always "mag" a terrific write,,,

i always enjoy reading...

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2009-03-24 04:09 PM

Soon the offering will dance
the serpent’s eyes as tendrils
of the vine gently twist the
stem and break the offering
to man from the tender and
delicate hands of woman............................."

You mean, always a MAGnificent write!
~Enjoyed the poem, also mostly this top poetic part, just wonderful

ARCTIC WIND

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