Open Poetry #27 |
Diabetes |
the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
With this disease You do not play You must keep on a strict Diet every single day You have to check your blood And keep it normal For if you don't You may end up in the hospital You have to make sure Your sugar is neither To high or to low For if this happens You will end up in a coma So if you stick to your diet And check your blood Exercise regularly Actually all of the above You can keep Diabetes in check Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
My Dad knows that pain. :P What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
My grandpa has diabetes, too. He's had it for as long as I can remember and he has never ended up in the hospital because of it. I'll pray for your dad, Julie! ~Elizabeth Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
good reminder for many people...keep up your writes and try to put a little more rhythm with your words |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
My husband developed mature age diabetes 6 years ago , yes all you say in the poem is so true Hope |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Hey Julie thank you My uncle had diabetes . . . xxoo |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
loner23...A very valuable poem. I live with this disease...so I know what truth lies in its words. Thank you. ***Ivy Rose |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
ah..... you left out the most important part -- with diet and exercise most can avoid getting it altogeter..... we're at epedemic levels here in the U.S. -- keep spreading the word |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
That is not a fun thing to have!-- I feel so sorry for people on pip and in the world who have it ARCTIC WIND |
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