Open Poetry #27 |
A Marriage Made In Heaven |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Picture by Alan Ayers * * * On the edge of the Pacific Ocean Beside a sea of sapphire blue The sun is close to setting As the bride comes into view Frangipanis in her hair And rose oil on her skin The next chapter in her life Is about to begin She walks towards her man Barefoot along the sand A smile spreads across his face As he takes hold of her hand Their bodies move in closer As their fingers interlace He is captivated by her beauty Her sheer elegance and grace A celebrant will witness The union of their love As their vows are softly spoken The seagulls circle high above Wedding rings are exchanged And a kiss seals their love As they release into the sky A single white dove Two souls have joined together And two hearts beat as one A marriage made in heaven Beneath the warm Summer sun * * * "Wine comes in at the mouth and love comes in at the eye That's all we know for truth before we grow old and die I lift the glass to my mouth I look at you, and I sigh" I am in motion I am blue Love is an ocean I'm anchored in you - Shawn Mullins [This message has been edited by Suetang (06-18-2003 11:11 PM).] |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
breathtaking I love your words I love the picture gives me hope that it does exist and soon maybe it will be my turn If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Speechless Cold hands means a warm heart |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
That's beautiful, Sue, both the words and the picture. Marriage and love are so special and you did them justice here. ~Elizabeth Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: What a beautiful place for a wedding! The sea provides all the music you could want. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sue Excellent setting and a beautiful write! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sue, Way cool! My son and daughter-in-law got married on the beach in Jamaica! This is perfect. Well done as only a true romantic, lik you, can do. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
always in awe of how you create these |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Sue, this is so beautiful. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh how beautiful Sue!! This one I especially love. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Sue, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I dream of being married in the future and if possible having my wedding on a beach! (kiss on cheek) I have dreams like that a lot, yay, this is absolutely magical, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Perfect love and images,sue. Thank you. Goldenrose. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
ahhhh! Very lovely written ARCTIC WIND |
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