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gemjop
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0 posted 2003-06-19 06:14 AM



In sleep rests grief

awake

less alone than before

regrets

only suffering so long

memories

beautiful ache of you

believing

you were my future

real

we lived it, felt it

smile

i asked and recieved

til next time

my reason

experienced.


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inkedgoddess
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1 posted 2003-06-19 06:55 AM


beautiful ache of you

such a beautiful ache it is, isn't it?
very well expressed, gemma

LeeJ
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2 posted 2003-06-19 06:55 AM


Living and feeling love, life, is our purpose, along with the experiences of all things...lovely write  LeeJ.
Toerag
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3 posted 2003-06-19 07:51 AM


Well done gal....I've sure had my share of morning's after....both kinds.....You know, after the party, A slice of cold pizza, and wash it down with warm beer?....
RedStoneEB
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4 posted 2003-06-19 07:52 AM


liked it alot gem good work

my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing

Aenimal
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5 posted 2003-06-19 09:03 AM


ouch
passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2003-06-19 01:46 PM


very sadly beautiful
gemjop
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7 posted 2003-06-19 01:57 PM


Thankyou for the replies. i'm in a place i didnt ever want to wake up in, nor think i ever would.(no, not a strangers bed) lol, but such is life eh?

much love
gemma
xxxxx

Earth Angel
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8 posted 2003-06-19 02:01 PM


I think you need an extra warm hug this morning...O

~ May each day become brighter than the day before.

Sending spoonfuls of happy sugar,
EA

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2003-06-19 02:19 PM


There's got to be a morning after...thinking of the song...James
littlewing
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10 posted 2003-06-20 01:12 AM


Ok I order you out of my head
this minute!
Actually, nice to have you in my head
gemma - this one hurted . . .
xxoo

timothysangel1973
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11 posted 2003-06-20 01:54 AM


Beautiful peice of work!!

I liked, and related very well!

Lots of hugs....Tima C

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Goldenrose
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12 posted 2003-06-20 07:54 AM


very nice write, the ache is all too evident.

thank you


Goldenrose.


gemjop
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13 posted 2003-06-20 07:58 AM


to you all...this ache is fading....thanks to you all....soon i shall be smiling.
Artic Wind
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14 posted 2008-02-26 07:28 PM


Enjoyed the Write!

ARCTIC WIND

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