Open Poetry #27 |
NUMB REL:IEF |
gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Here flies the end cotton white surrender love beaten never forgotten numb relief escapee of the changed you your selfishness plagued every dream sequence and i disbelieved alone in love with you the old you freedom catches us all. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Captivating write, enjoyed this a lot! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sometimes I believe love is more like a hurricane.....for a while it drenches you, then tries to blow you away...then..all of a sudden it is calm...before the storm riles again...only from a different direction. So many variables... |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
It's all true girl. Great job... I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
God, i don't know what to say to this...hugs are better..or a pint..yes yes a pint or two |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Electric! Very well done. TD |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
stunning write! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
yes gemma exactly . . . the old you perfectly said sorry you know this . . . sorry I can relate lol awesome write always are xxoo |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I like the name, Its cool! ARCTIC WIND |
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