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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla 
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mabey if i go so slow mabey ill know next where to go,mabey i will know who i am the relfection in the mirror is all to clear its all right there in front of my face,though i grow fear maybe if i can listen to my advice maybe if i can just do what i can then i can figure out what to do next enough with this confusing sex blury as the sky is cloudy today nothing makes anymore sence now then it did back when scared and frightened i am and maybe if i think i can call you my freind,then i can see blindly through your flaws and enforce your cause you love me so though i cant understand why, i am the one that always seems to make you cry not knowing what i want from this day to the next dont know what's going to go on this week or the next. Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... [This message has been edited by Foxyoasis (06-18-2003 07:24 PM).] |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"you love me so though i cant understand why, i am the one that always seems to make you cry" Very expressive, but sad!  I enjoyed the read, thank you. |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
Thanks ever so much,you guys are to kind to my poetry on here,for none of mine can really hold a candle to some on here. Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
liked the sadness to this |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
 ARCTIC WIND |
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