Judas Kiss (An Aenimal & Ceinwyn Duet)

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Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09

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0 posted 2003-06-18 06:52 PM

Penetrate my naivite
with the promise
of long insatiable nights
lull me into the
endless sleep of reason
lost in dreams and
whispered words
Make me believe
in Love just long enough
for you to run your blade
across this bruised heart
softly piercing
the last remnants
of hope
In A Judas Kiss

[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (06-18-2003 06:54 PM).]

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-06-18 06:59 PM

Wonderful write! Very beautiful words..

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

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South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2003-06-18 07:00 PM

a very good melding of poetic styles of the
two of you. Nicely done..

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2003-06-18 07:02 PM

smiling...love the poem, but? *eyes twinkle* ya'll know methinks Judas completely misunderstood...

Love the poem, tho the message stings.

Great work, you two.

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2003-06-18 10:59 PM

Thanks all and k, I have my thoughts on Judas but not for this place!..but the term Judas kiss still stands that's why we used it..Kris wrote the meat of the peice i just added my own insanity to the mix

Ceinwyn
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5 posted 2003-06-18 11:13 PM

*curtsies* it was a pleasure now I can let Raphey out of his chains and aww isn't he adorable when he's acting all modest

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

passing shadows
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displaced

6 posted 2003-06-19 02:32 AM

wonderful!

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

7 posted 2003-06-19 03:03 AM

This is (edited by myself) awesommmmme!!!!

You guys are amazing - mannnn . . .

This is the best thing I have read all night . . .

Strong punch guys

Raph and Kris - you guys write some
awesome poetry together
excellent job!

(umm . . . I do feel Judas was
misjudged . . . I had to comment lol)

Great read . . . *shaking head* yes yes
xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (06-19-2003 03:04 AM).]

D'sWhisper
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since 2003-06-16

Posts 68
Washington, USA

8 posted 2003-06-19 04:37 AM

Wow! I get a bet annoyed with myself when I can't think of any thing other then "Wow"...but I don't want to belittle my sentiment for this one...so I'll just stick with "wow". <>DW<>

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18

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Pencilveinia, USA

9 posted 2003-06-19 01:43 PM

Make me believe
in Love just long enough
for you to run your blade
across this bruised heart
softly piercing
the last remnants
of hope
In A Judas Kiss
yes.....

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

10 posted 2003-06-20 11:12 AM

. . . this needs to breathe . . .

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

11 posted 2003-06-20 11:18 AM

and again...

I like the softer side of this

"Make me believe
in Love just long enough
for you to run your blade
across this bruised heart
softly piercing
the last remnants
of hope"...

M

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

12 posted 2008-03-01 02:27 PM

Enjoyed the Read!

ARCTIC WIND

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