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exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2003-06-19 10:46 PM

Tears blur my eyes
i'm lost in my thoughts of you
not noticing the pain i'm showing on the outside
you look at me
and whisper softly to see if i'm still here
to see if i'm still grounded on this earth
i smile
wipe away the tears
and find my mask
i'm alright
i'm fine
everythings just fine
but its not
i try to show my affections towards you
and yet i dont exist
and yet i'm still lost in my thoughts of you
knowing that thats all i'll ever have
...my thoughts...

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

1 posted 2003-06-19 11:00 PM

thoughts are what we're left with...once the material stuff in the world disappears, you captures that thought. One suggestion for you would be to see how others compose their poems and try your hand at the different techniques until you find one or some that you feel comfortable with... the importance is being true to the what you want to communicate through the words and not vice- versa, welcome to the forum

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (06-19-2003 11:01 PM).]

Canon_D_111
Member

since 2003-06-04

Posts 58
New York USA

2 posted 2003-06-19 11:12 PM

I have asked myself many times if this is all I am. just thoughts and memories. but then I realize I am also the dreams I've yet to live...
wonderfull writing

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2003-06-20 10:42 AM

I think a lot of us identify with the wearing of masks... aching to find acceptance for ourself, not the picture we present. *S*

Welcome to Passions... I enjoyed the read! *S*

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

4 posted 2003-06-20 11:31 AM

there will be someone out there, to wipe away your tears and sooth your acheing heart. great write with honesty, depth and truth.

Thank you for the words, so painful for you to write.

Goldenrose.

[This message has been edited by Goldenrose (06-20-2003 11:32 AM).]

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2008-03-01 02:27 PM

Enjoyed your thoughts lol

ARCTIC WIND

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