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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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When the sun shines upon my face Oh! It is pure heaven . . . until I look into a mirror and am left with nothing but sunburn [This message has been edited by littlewing (06-18-2003 04:32 PM).] |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
And then I look for you, and see sun touched heaven again. Jason |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Hey susie! been sunbathing then? naughty gal. no sunscreen. tut tut. oh i'd love a tan, but cant stand sunbathing. i'm as white as a sheet without my trusty old fake tan. visited my aunty in america this time last year, in st. george. sun burn isnt harsh enough a word to describe my skin. trying to put and keep a bra on was hilarious..but not...ooooh the pain! thanks sue, this made me smile.  love ya girlie! gem xxxx |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, have I ever been there! Went from "sun goddess" to sunburned mess! lol  Huggums, Linda [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (06-18-2003 04:59 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Ouch! SPF35...before... Like this, nicely done.. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Some rays forgot to reflect, too much time in the sun. A lesson learned, I expect ... ... under the moon is more fun!!  ROFL@gemma / time is all that can soothe that much itch!! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
You are the sun, the mirror and the image stairing back. Each the perfection reflection of the moment. Deeply felt poem. Eric |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
ouch! I've been a crispy critter more than once in the past. Now I buy sunblock by the gallon.  [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (06-18-2003 08:16 PM).] |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I like being pale thank you very much reminds me one time when I was 12 andd my mum was being a *censor* I had 2 stay out all day playing I was sooo burnt I couldn't sit down  lol sorry having a moment loved this tho If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What we will go to, just to see that rosey glow! Enjoyed. TD |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I liked this, too, Sue. Reminded me of a lot of sunburned days under these Florida skies. I love the sun and the beaches, though.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Look closer and deeper and see why yer nickname is angel |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
1. 2. 3. okay, i did it......... short, sweet, and cute as you must be red as sun |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
There is always a price to pay for the pleasure, especially if it makes you feel warm inside. I bet your cheeks look good in the blush..... tweets~ |
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Forgotenandgone Member
since 2003-05-07
Posts 52NC |
good litte poem _______________________________________ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sue, Well did you get your hands on my mirror? Hmmm? LOL Cute write. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah...sigh |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Ha! Yeah this is great! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Jason: how utterly sweet of you God that made my night - thank you Gem: lmao - that happened to me once from a tanning bed - the bra deal OUCH is right hehehe thank you love ya back Linda: lol - you will always be a sungoddess thank you Magnus - dang! thats what I use on my son lmao thank you C: that is why I like the night thank you Thanks V! Ericc: how sweet - you are so so sweet what a beautiful reply - thank you Hey Kacy: lmao - by the gallon? You slab it on like butter huh? thank you Kris: lmfaoooooo - sorry but yes have a memory like that myself - is ok - you can have a moment anytime you want - thank you Hey Diamond - you know? geeez . . . thank you Ethel: me too - I am Summer . . . thank you Raph: now somehow I just KNEW you would KNOW - you know? So so very sweet to me here - thank you - made my late late night much better - hmmm . . . wher'd I get that nickname? lol thanks sweety xxoo Michele: LMFAOOOOOOO breathe . . . . . OK you made it! Cool . . . lol thank you (stil laughing sorry not funny . . .) Bluesy: hehehehe I'm Irish - I burn then I tan . . . thank you - tweets xxoo Thanks Forgoten! Larry - ahahahaha I hope we dont have the same mirror - OMG is that why I am so confused all the time? lmao thank you Dixie: Yep - you know too . . . thank you Thanks Ethome! Thanks guys xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (06-19-2003 03:24 AM).] |
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D'sWhisper Member
since 2003-06-16
Posts 68Washington, USA |
How utterly simple and purposeful on a few different fronts! At face value this is cute and a great little read. Deeper into the flesh, it is metaphorically rousing. I enjoyed it. <>DW<> |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thanks D! Welcome to PIP! I have to go find you now . . . you saw right through the burn now didnt you? [This message has been edited by littlewing (06-19-2003 04:10 AM).] |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods |
You have a way of writing short and simple, but there is so much more meaning in those few words. Yours truly ~Broken~ Such griefs with such men well agree, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Then again, sunburn can be a beautiful thing when you are reminded how you found your place in the sun and just stepping out the screen door you will find it yet again! (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is a treasure, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
hey! be nice to that reflection or learn to see deeper into those sunsquinted eyes ok? |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
sun cream for suzie,sun cream for suzie. Dont get your face burnt.or anyhting else for that matter, use the cream, that'l make it better. Goldenrose. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you Broken - I try . . . Noah - I agree - thank you Bri - ok ok if I must . . . thanks bri Phil - ahahahah ok ok I promise Thanks guys xxoo |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Its good for everyone to reflect! ARCTIC WIND |
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