Open Poetry #27 |
Shades Of Midnight Blue |
ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Time comes following each day when I, and stars, fade away Gone still unlike thoughts of you, myself, shades of midnight blue Rested upon pillowed clouds, rolling over, morning shrouds Take note of each prayer said, at last, putting the night to bed Fear is a blindness, heart is the cure. - C. Belville 02 |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"Gone still unlike thoughts of you, myself, shades of midnight blue" Very captivating lines! Great write. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Fantastic! Love the imagery, love the format. a keeper! Maree |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Lovely, like a dream drifting in and out, flowing endlessly in a stream of thought. It's always nice to read you Craig~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Little snippets of a poem, when pieced together...a nice job. Thanx Craig... The blue is felt.. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Nice flow to this, Craig, and it reads nicely out loud. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I was drawn to this because I've been working on something with a similar title... and from your first lines, I was glad I'd stopped... I like it very much. *S* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
tuck me in there too, will ya? |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Time comes following each day when I, and stars, fade away Gone still unlike thoughts of you, myself, shades of midnight blue Love ya Craigy. this just sings. simple as that. beautiful. and in my library. Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Oh..I like this, Craig...very much. Beautifully done, sir. Hugs, ~Vicky "My friends are my estate." |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Loved the imagery, the flow, and all your words brought. angelblueyes |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Rested upon pillowed clouds, rolling over, morning shrouds Take note of each prayer said, at last, putting the night to bed I love this, Craig. It's beautiful. Hugs Ethel |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Craig, this one is so beautiful. I'm glad someone brought it back to the top. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Craig,you are midnight blue and I am misty blue. You know this is good, hm? Sandra |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Vicky angelblueyes - thank you greatly! Ethel KC - We are ALL thankful for our precious Gem!! Dix - Hmmm ... that has to be some kind of dance The BUMP!!!!! Sandra - I had no idea! But I do have one thought ... ... play Misty for me? (love those piano solos) |
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