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Ericc
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0 posted 2003-07-22 09:31 AM



Falling is always
easy -

Our every step remains
unsure.

This moment alone presents a
thousand different ways
of dieing.

Yet only one...offered in
the sake of love.

We need nothing
more
than
this.

And so we
fall.



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Kaoru
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1 posted 2003-07-22 09:39 AM


Wow, this is very cool, the style is awesome.
I loved this:

This moment alone presents a
thousand different ways
of dieing.

Yet only one...offered in
the sake of love.

Going in my library.

Enchantress
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2 posted 2003-07-22 09:50 AM


Wonderful Eric..
Nothing quite like...falling in love.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

gemjop
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3 posted 2003-07-22 09:53 AM


We need nothing
more
than
this.

And so we
fall.


You're great y'know? telling it like it is.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

garysgirl
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4 posted 2003-07-22 09:55 AM


We need nothing
more
than
this.

And so we
fall.


Eric, have I told you lately that
I love your writing? Well, I do.  
Hugs  
Ethel

Patricia
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5 posted 2003-07-22 10:01 AM


Oh Eric...I think you are making me rethink my "midnight decision."  So, do I fall?  And is what we have all we need?  And why I am asking you these questions?  LOL  You got me thinking again.  

A great write!

Patricia

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6 posted 2003-07-22 10:03 AM



Seems to me that to fall
in love
is to rise
in dreams.

Well done, Sir.

AnamCara
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7 posted 2003-07-22 10:03 AM


...only to find
that we have fallen into
a
brand
new
beginning

Love,
Angela

Ericc
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8 posted 2003-07-22 10:14 AM


Dear Patricia,
To fall is to simply...let go.
Follow you deepest heart expression...you will know what to do.
Sometimes in letting go...we gain everything.

There is a saying in Vedanta..."Not this, Not that". By eliminating..."not this"
you arrive at the Source.

Love,
Eric

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with you
9 posted 2003-07-22 10:37 AM


you are one of my most favorite romantic writers ever....
Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2003-07-22 10:58 AM


Ericc
Good one, enjoyed the read.

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11 posted 2003-07-22 01:36 PM


"Falling is always
easy -"

---AMEN---

ThisDiamond
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12 posted 2003-07-22 05:32 PM


Eric...
You have honed this style so well, it has become a masterpiece of feeling and romance.
Breathless. TD

JamesMichael
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13 posted 2003-07-22 06:55 PM


Many times I can't stop myself from falling...although sometimes I have regrets...James
Margherita
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14 posted 2003-07-23 04:21 AM


You give a whole new, most profound meaning to the saying .... I die for love ...
In falling we open the floodgate ... to drown in love.
Falling ... unafraid!
Poetry to "get lost" in ... just awesome.
I love you. Margherita

littlewing
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15 posted 2003-07-24 10:23 PM


and so we fall . . .
God Eric you make it sound so easy
beautiful
xxoo

angelblueyes
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16 posted 2003-07-24 11:51 PM


Ericc,
This is one I'm in awe of. The style, the words, the imagery.Falling is easy and if we did it more we night see that the rewards are magnificent.
angelblueyes

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