Open Poetry #27 |
To fall... |
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Falling is always easy - Our every step remains unsure. This moment alone presents a thousand different ways of dieing. Yet only one...offered in the sake of love. We need nothing more than this. And so we fall. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Wow, this is very cool, the style is awesome. I loved this: This moment alone presents a thousand different ways of dieing. Yet only one...offered in the sake of love. Going in my library. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful Eric.. Nothing quite like...falling in love. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
We need nothing more than this. And so we fall. You're great y'know? telling it like it is. Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
We need nothing more than this. And so we fall. Eric, have I told you lately that I love your writing? Well, I do. Hugs Ethel |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Oh Eric...I think you are making me rethink my "midnight decision." So, do I fall? And is what we have all we need? And why I am asking you these questions? LOL You got me thinking again. A great write! Patricia |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Seems to me that to fall in love is to rise in dreams. Well done, Sir. |
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AnamCara Junior Member
since 2003-06-25
Posts 41Canada |
...only to find that we have fallen into a brand new beginning Love, Angela |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Dear Patricia, To fall is to simply...let go. Follow you deepest heart expression...you will know what to do. Sometimes in letting go...we gain everything. There is a saying in Vedanta..."Not this, Not that". By eliminating..."not this" you arrive at the Source. Love, Eric |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you are one of my most favorite romantic writers ever.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ericc Good one, enjoyed the read. |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
"Falling is always easy -" ---AMEN--- |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Eric... You have honed this style so well, it has become a masterpiece of feeling and romance. Breathless. TD |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Many times I can't stop myself from falling...although sometimes I have regrets...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You give a whole new, most profound meaning to the saying .... I die for love ... In falling we open the floodgate ... to drown in love. Falling ... unafraid! Poetry to "get lost" in ... just awesome. I love you. Margherita |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
and so we fall . . . God Eric you make it sound so easy beautiful xxoo |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Ericc, This is one I'm in awe of. The style, the words, the imagery.Falling is easy and if we did it more we night see that the rewards are magnificent. angelblueyes |
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