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Just Ordinary Things
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Just Ordinary Things |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass 
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Just Ordinary Things There it is a note about her day just ordinary things ordinary day perhaps a little treat to brighten her morning an errand friend met little duty that she's done just ordinary things ordinary things that lift me simple words of her living that bring joy any touch, any of her reality kissing mine is all bliss even just ordinary things [This message has been edited by Ratleader (06-18-2003 05:10 PM).] |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Nicely done. A very enjoyable read.  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Yes I understand this. A wonderful write m'friend Maree |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
I often think it is the small moments in life which have the greatest impact. Thank you for sharing this poem. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ed....When you care for someone, every little thing about them is special and important, isn't it? I'll bet she feels the same way.  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
When you think about it, life is made up of ordinary things, that take on a new meaning when they are shared with someone who genuinely cares. The simplicity in this is what makes it extra special. Very touching Ed~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
ordinary things that lift me simple words of her living that bring joy any touch, any of her reality kissing mine ======================== well the sweet sincerety of this makes me have a simply perfect poetic sigh.  Lovely heart thoughts poet sir. No matter what the differences |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Lovely thoughts here. Ordinary things may touch someone in extraordinary ways. Marilyn. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
How nice, when ordinary things fit, they are not so ordinary after all. - - - - - - (Hey, Ed, about your pic.? Are you letting the rats out, or waiting for their return? Hadn't looked closely before, to notice the gate. :-)) Kraw' |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Well.... if it takes an eight foot storm fence to control 'em....I'm deciding which side they'll be on, so I can be on the other! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The simplist of life is the richest... Very much appreciated this gem. TD |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
The major events in our lives can often be announced to one and all... but most of our existence is rather uninteresting and even mundane. *S* To have someone taking pleasure in the ordinary moments of life is to know you've found true caring. *S* This is beautiful! *S* |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Very sweet write Ed, it's all in the little things |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
yes I echo the rest..I enjoy the little things *sigh* I'm a simple kinda gal  If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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OwlPoet Junior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 17Fullerton, California, Urantia |
I am touched by the pure simplicity of how you capture the "routine prose of common existence" Well done my brother. I just joined this group and hope to post a poem or two soon. I like this group already! Will Patrick |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Glad to see you Owl -- I've been waiting a long time to see your face in this group! ATTENTION PIPSTERS: OwlPoet is a personal friend of mine, the only poet I know, outside of PIP.... And one of the best I've ever known. You will see! Oh yes, you will see! Post 'em up, Owl.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
ordinary things that lift me simple words of her living that bring joy any touch, any of her reality kissing mine is all bliss even just ordinary things Ed, this is how my Honey-Love and I are, too. Thanks for sharing this. Oh, and tell your friend, Will, that I took a sneak look at his web-page. I love his love poetry and, being the hopeless romantic that I am, I'll be looking for his poems here. "To be in love with love is truly to love".....by Paladin |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Those little sticky notes are great, aren't they? I like the ones that barely give you enough room to say HEY, Have some fun today! Yep, it's those ordinary day-to-day things that are worth remembering. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice write here Ed. Great to see your friend here too! Can't wait to read some! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
well done Ed... but ordinary? not if seen through your eyes with such a tender touch... no not ordinary at all... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
~soft smiles here~ Lovely..very lovely. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
any of her reality kissing mine is all bliss ...... Ah... well said... pleased to read you Regards sudhir |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Wonderfully Penned ARCTIC WIND |
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