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Finding Herself
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Finding Herself |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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Finding Herself Her hands are poised over the keyboard Soft music is playing To set the mood. Her fingers are ready to dance on the keys To become someone else When suddenly She sees the wrinkles in her bent wrist So she stops to pour lotion on her hands Hoping to stall time And the damage it’s always done. Once again She locks her door So no one will know Who she really is. So as the music plays And she begins to write She finds herself Once more BloomingRose |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
BloomingRose, the music plays and we sing the songs of yesterday, to think back and realise how quickly time has gone, and even though we still feel much the same, we have aged, time is not kind to us and what it brings we can not change, nor should we try too hard. Writing is so wonderful and fulfilling, with the music let your fingers dance the waltz of words; down memories lane or onward to future's gaze. I enjoyed your words here, great write. Take care and never be afraid of being you. Sincerely Rick |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Thaughtfull and a liitle sad,but withcandid truth. Thank you. Goldenrose. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
What cream do you use? Does it really work?!?  A beautifully written expose of an aspect of one's inner--and outer--self. Warm hugs, EA [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (06-17-2003 11:20 AM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
funny how we notice the wrinkles of time...when we least expect to. M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So good to read you Deb! This has sad overtones.. and it is amazing as to when we suddenly realize the wrinkles, and that time is not standing still. Excellent thoughts here. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BloomingRose~ This is hauntingly beautiful~ So good to see you and read you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Debra, I think this feeling is ever so natural, dearest friend, I send angel hugs to you and remember always that the spirit of the little girl always lives in your heart and smiling like her will have you playing like her forever and evermore! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Debra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Debra, It's good to see you here. I really enjoyed this poem, even though it does have a little sadness to it. Thanks for sharing.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Forgotenandgone Member
since 2003-05-07
Posts 52NC |
When i read this poem everything was like what im doing right now except for the lotion and it was scary...but cool because i like have soft music playing and stuff Woah thats neto _______________________________________ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very nice in depth write. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
tender and sad, good stuff |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Thank you...Though I seem to stray away from writing poetry from time to time, I always know I can come back home to the blue pages. Hugs to all, Deb |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Beautiful Name! ARCTIC WIND |
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