Open Poetry #27 |
Worth the Wait |
topsyturveychick Member
since 2003-01-19
Posts 57Bris,QLD,Aus |
---I met this great guy, and we kissed a couple times. We're both strong christians and we felt that we wern't really honouring God in our relationship. We both decided that we should strat over and get to know each other as friends first rather than lovers or bf/gf what ever u want to call it. I wrote this for him, just to let him know that I'll wait for him.-- Worth the Wait Your smile makes my heart skip a beat, And my mind think a thousand thoughts. Your touch sends nerves shooting through my body, And leaves me feeling weak. Your being lets me feel safe and loved, Wanting you more each day. You not being with me, Lets me know what they mean by love hurts. You...you leave me thinking, feeling, wanting, Knowing and understanding... Understanding why you're worth the wait. I asked God how much he loved me... |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I relate to this one. I feel this everyday I spend with my Liam. Awesome write. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
I feel the same things for Julie. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
May I say, more power to you? Bless you for your integrity. Another excellent write, keep it up! If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good write! |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Howdy! What a wonderful guy to have that is so understanding! I really like this piece.. it describes your love and his understanding so very well. The last guy I dated was a Christian and he wasn't so understanding about things like this, but you are very lucky and blessed. You will be blessed for your obedience to the Lord Oh, make me Thine forever |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
topsyturveychick - from the way it sounds you two have really hit it together. I like your poem and the words to it. Very upbeat and meaningful... BC |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Waiting - That's where I'm at, too. But whoever she is, she is worth waiting for... “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
love is worth the wait, very much enjoyed this happy positive read.... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Chemistry is an amazing thing, isn't it? This is a lovely and sentimental piece, topsyturvy... |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed the Write! ARCTIC WIND |
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