Open Poetry #27 |
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Love Fills Each Waking Moment |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia ![]() |
![]() Picture by Josephine Wall * * * * I have kept my feelings hidden They've been bottled up inside But now the time has come For I can no longer hide You touched a vital organ And you filled it with your love My spirit was uplifted To the heavens high above You made me feel important Someone special in your eyes When your love moved in to stay My heart grew in size Before you my heart was lonely It was damaged beyond repair But you filled an empty void With your tender loving care Once again love is in focus And my life has turned around Love fills each waking moment With every sight and every sound * * * "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides" I am in motion |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Sue you write these tender love poems so perfectly and this one was another one which was "heart full of love " expressed Hope P.S love the new pic and by the way I still post at Icyheart's board now the meadow is closed , come and join us |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nice imagery of this write, terrific feelings expressed,,, A voice of honesty |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes! yes! Yes! nice! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fantastic write...James |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Sue, if you have found love again, congratulations, may the sun shine on both sides forever, I enjoyed the read, thanks for sharing. Sincerely Rick |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sue: good for you you deserve the world at your feet! Ahhh I have missed these: "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides" yes . . . yes it is xxoo |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Good poem, Sue. And I love the quotes that you put at the end of your poems! “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: Lovely poem and thanks for sending it to me. Betty Lou Hebert |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sue What a beautiful well written poem and I wish all the love in the world to touch you and be sealed in your heart! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
This was romantic and I loved the picture! |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Great rhyme and subject of love perfect. loved the pictures, wish i knew how to put on such great images.....! Thank you for the words sue. Goldenrose. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Awwww Sue, this is so beautiful. I truely enjoy reading your poems. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
So beautiful Indeed ARCTIC WIND |
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