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Open Poetry #27

Lost Without You In My Life

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

0 posted 2003-06-18 10:04 AM

I keep trying to fight my way
Through the darkness
Ive cast inside
To your touch that
Will light me up

My tears fall
Forming rivers
Of loneliness
Just need your love
To sail up stream

Thought the dark I call your name
Hoping that your there
To set me free from
The prison
This darkness ive cast inside

Angels appear from all around
Guiding my soul
Towards you

There you await
In the gardens of love
Waiting for
A strange to come
And touch
Your soul inside

As I approach
I dry my eyes
I know that ive
Found my light

No more darkness
Left inside
Just my heart
Beating

Your touch
Warms my soul
And
I know
Ive found you

[This message has been edited by RedStoneEB (06-18-2003 03:20 PM).]

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-06-18 10:05 AM

Lee?

this is beautiful, friend
you are finding your way
xxoo

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

2 posted 2003-06-18 11:54 AM

thanks littlewing for reading it seems your the only one that did

my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2003-06-18 12:45 PM

This really reaches out and touches the reader...

Peace, Love & Light,
Earth Angel

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-06-18 01:04 PM

wow, maybe one day I'll feel it too..good write, gives me hope

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

5 posted 2003-06-18 03:13 PM

thank you thank you *bows* lol thanks for the wonderful replys

Earths angel - glad you feel i t leaps out at the reader your comments mean alot to me since your my fave poet

passing shadow - hey hey my freind can i call you that? glad you enjoy reading my poems

ah littlewing - lol another one of my fave poets lol glad you enjoy reading my work

my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

6 posted 2008-02-22 08:44 PM

Very Touching!

ARCTIC WIND

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