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From where I Lie
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From where I Lie |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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From where I Lie I watch the leavings of the sky The grieving of the hues that dies Magenta’s bed with red run through It hovers me with claming view. The sadness of the flow sends awe That ripples to my very core It hugs my chest to tight, to tight The ending of the day to night I swallow in the pain of know I wallow in its wane of throw And brine has run its salty grime To join the ending of a time The grieving of the hues that dies The leavings of the awesome sky The misty spread of gold and red The glory of its florid bed But I am resurrected lieu The coming of new mornings coup |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Hey SY: this reminded me of Thomas' "Do Not Go Gentle Into That Good Night" excellent images there and thanks for the view xxoo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
littlewing He is one of my favorites, thank you.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"The grieving of the hues that dies The leavings of the awesome sky The misty spread of gold and red The glory of its florid bed But I am resurrected lieu The coming of new mornings coup" This is SO beautiful Sy! And, just think you have a chance to watch another sunset the next night. How about blueberry tea this morn? ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Thank you dear I'd enjoy that. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I watch the leavings of the sky The grieving of the hues that dies Magenta’s bed with red run through It hovers me with claming view. Beautiful pictures you write this morn! thankyou for this Seymour. blueberry muffins with your blueberry tea? hugs, Chris  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, Just the thing I need. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
The grieving of the hues that dies The leavings of the awesome sky The misty spread of gold and red The glory of its florid bed But I am resurrected lieu The coming of new mornings coup Seymour, this is so beautiful. I love the sunset, don't you? Have a good day....  Ethel |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There are those special, rare moments, when His palette is so perfect that not to notice, would almost be a sin... Never fear to recognize the beauty and never apologize for the emotions it draws forth... for we are only here by His grace and if we can, in turn, share that moment with others, then it is the poet, and the painter who will do so. And I just happen to know for a matter of fact that you wear both hats quite well.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel, Thank you sweet, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Your flattery makes me fly. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
what would a morning be, without your words to sweeten the air? hugs Sy M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, Thank you sweet. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I love this perspective... to mourn the passing of the colors... while most of us are still enthralled with the show. *S* Excellent, dear Seymour! *S* |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I must have need of a new perscription for my proverbial rose-colored glasses! I could have sworn that you had written "Margherita's" bed, instead of "Magenta's" bed! LOL Sending you a pallette of my heavenly watercolor paints to perk up the colors in your world!  Love & Light, EA [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (06-18-2003 12:38 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
another awesome write!  |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Fine work sir. Fine work. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
***The grieving of the hues that dies enjoyed this line,, very good write... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Thank you my sweet. Earth Angel, Didn't know Angels had a sense of humor. LOL passing, Another awesome reply. wranx, A pleasure to see your comment, thank you. QjQ, Glad you enjoyed. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
With each new morn's salient sunrise ... the day is reborn in resplendant reprise. Your rhymes so lovley ... make me sigh on high ... if I but could I would write your name cross satin skies.    No matter what the differences No matter what the cost When words become our weapons ... All that's beautiful is lost. DeVante' [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (06-18-2003 05:49 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sy, you get two pleasures....going to rest as the night comes...rising upon the new day...none of us know when that last set will arrive |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, It would be nice to see in the evening sky. WWRS Magnus You got the point. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
A fine Write! ARCTIC WIND |
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