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Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2003-06-17 07:57 PM

Vignette 7

It seemed to have
a name, for it was the

          one that waited, just for her hand

                        to pluck, to place, to purview
                            a slender vase held it for all to see

as the bud became the bloom

           but when the emotional rains came,
                      as they will

it held them all in full round shine,

           ignoring their salt,
                                             for she had once stopped to smell
                                                                This rose

and since it bore a name,
it would not
leave her now.

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Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-06-17 07:59 PM

Absolutely beautiful!

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

2 posted 2003-06-17 08:10 PM

Very cool spring moment Kari, perfect poem pic combo. (Say that 3 times real fast

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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2003-06-17 08:17 PM

I wish it would stop raining enough for me to see my flowers bloom...in the meantime I can enjoy yours and the others on here.

*s
M

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2003-06-17 08:19 PM

Yes, I did miss something...darn, drat,
sheesh!! Composition perfection...with
a rose to grace your heart.

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

5 posted 2003-06-18 12:01 PM

Connections, K, evident here. I read Vignette 6 and got booted in my response.
Hmmm, very interesting turn of words.

I shall explain further in a.m.

Patricia

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554