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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
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of Depression

0 posted 2003-06-18 05:21 AM


There are times,
Beyond the conjuring rhymes,
Times silent
Where the muttering inside
Commands memories to hide

Times unspent
In reflection of emotions,
Those too light
Too shallow in their spirit
Without substance to merit

Not too bright,
Moves in unnoticed motion,
Right by you
As if a gnat or a fly
Too minuscule for the eye

In plain view
It just bounces off your mind,
As if blind
To the passing of moments.

Gloom


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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2003-06-18 05:22 AM


yeah...sigh
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
2 posted 2003-06-18 10:12 AM


Gloom:

yep every night:

Where the muttering inside
Commands memories to hide
xxoo

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2003-06-18 10:16 AM


Professor,
Very few notice, enjoyed.

JilGirl
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since 2003-05-24
Posts 364
Washington
4 posted 2003-06-18 10:16 AM


Gulp!

Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands.

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
5 posted 2008-02-22 05:56 PM


Enjoyed the Write



ARCTIC WIND

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