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Crows Weep
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Crows Weep |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Crows Weep crows weep I hear them cry as your love for me slowly dies they hang on the wind pretending to fly replaced by a breath that once was a sigh now broken echo lonesome winged sound in reply crows just weep I hear them cry |
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Laqe Member
since 2003-06-15
Posts 72Michigan, US |
How sad.. A very well-done poem as always, however. Thank you. .Echo. |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
such a mixture of sadness and beauty can only come from a broken heart. ~HUGS~ |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is sad, Helen, but I love the way you wrote it. Very good!! Hugs  Ethel |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
I'm speechless... If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Tis sad, but I could relate. I really liked this one. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
god... |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
h, I'm impressed, again. And again, the more times I read a piece of your work, the better it gets. I particularly like: "they hang on the wind pretending to fly" e [This message has been edited by Krawdad (06-17-2003 10:10 PM).] |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
their caws when the crows depart with the broken parts of your heart they will call back in flight into the night and then they will disappear s.a.g. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
certain love never dies  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Helen: I quote from a tune from the Chili Peppers their album, "Scar Tissue" "With the birds I share a lonely view" xxoo |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
OUUUU! Interesting Write! ARCTIC WIND |
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