Open Poetry #27 |
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The Roller Coaster Of Conformity |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Conformity Social pressure of set rules Pattern to someone else’s life Stagnation of non creativity Another’s opinion deciding yours Peaceful serenity of giving up Believing a person cannot change The death of the mind To never go barefoot again. Non-conformity Great experiment of living Mold to be never captured Exploration that never ends Storming emotions of learning Liberal arts of no set boundaries Jazz of feeling life’s hurts The blues of creating music Independence of a free flying bird. Roller Coaster The thrill of screaming in fear, to want to do it again. Loving so hard it pains, to then reinvent it in a cuddle. To have lived in a gutter, finding salvation by struggling harder. To find perfection in someone, to then realize they are mortal. Politicians whose vanity finally, flushes them down with truth. The preacher who get caught, preaching in someone’s else’s bed. Being able to teach so dynamically every emotion is captured in love. Conformity of never conforming, to anyone’s dictatorial power. I want to take my shoes off, to dance in the waters of change. I want to sing from a heart, that sees the blue skies tremble, storming in musical notes. I want to be never imprisoned by anyone’s conservative values of what life is about, to speak in my own words riding roller coasters. D.Lester Young Somewhere in America not on company time 05/16/03 |
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Kaoru![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Really wonderful definitions and declarations, I loved this write. ![]() |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
I want to take my shoes off, to dance in the waters of change. I want to sing from a heart, that sees the blue skies tremble, storming in musical notes. I want to be never imprisoned by anyone’s conservative values of what life is about, to speak in my own words riding roller coasters. Yes!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Wonderful imagery and expression of emotion. Beatifully written. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very cool! Yes! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Lester: yes . . . me too I want to be never imprisoned by anyone’s conservative values of what life is about, to speak in my own words riding roller coasters. xxoo |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Wonderfully Written! ARCTIC WIND |
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