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Lonely Moon
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Lonely Moon |
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Black Swan Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165on the moon 
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Where have my words got me What do I call this limbo this inbetween this shakedown I break down Slowly at first Doing okay Then, It all comes crashing down The sky fell on my head You were the sun And I the moon You cast your rays upon me, I glow Magical mysterious blue face Can't tell if I'm frowning or smiling The sun too bright to look at But all who stood under All who felt the heat All the lovely plants that grew Our vines of love The moon can't show Without her sun to glow Partners working together out in space The black Unknown One certainty I can't survive alone |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very heartfelt write |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
luciously deep and soul penetrating,dark, moody and deep. i love your words. thanks for sharing them. Goldenrose. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Talia: you would be surprised what you can accomplish when forced to I loved this: Can't tell if I'm frowning or smiling The sun too bright to look at YEP . . . nice write miss you xxoo |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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